Those Windy Days That Swirl Us With Love

by Everlasting   Dec 31, 2016


So windy are the days when autumn comes
that even some leaves that once fell with heartache
and that now rest on the floors
begin to swirl again in love.

And those that still remain
attached to branches of a tree,
they fall so tragically yet peacefully in love
just as I did when I met.... you.

But oh those winds that swirl me to your arms,
they are so gentle, yet they are like squalls.
I wonder if within the future to come
whether I'll still fall for you
all over again when autumn comes.

Written by: L.L.

December 30, 2016

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  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice love poem with a nature theme

    my favourite lines

    I wonder if within the future to come
    whether I'll still fall for you
    all over again when autumn comes.

    Ahhhh felt so right. ...

    5/5
    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Wow! I think this is very sweet and gentle write. You have done this very astoundingly, I feel the great rhythm of love in every lines. The season of autumn is truly unique, it bring loving people together again. I like they way you have constructed your fall with the falling of leaves.

    Last stanza:
    I feel the hope of love that it will come again in the season of autumn from the west to take you all the way to his kingdom. How beautiful this write. All the best.

  • 7 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Nice imagery of the falling Autumn leaves as symbols of the uncertainty in life and relationships.Well done!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    A lovely write, your visuals are so lush, well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Omg. This is an amazing write!! Ah!!
    Such beautiful rythym and flow here. Great job!!!

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