by Mr. Darcy
Nice to see you posting your work again. |
by Kasie
Thank you for your encouraging words. Depression is never easy. Writing always helps voice my thoughts. And best wishes for 2017 to you as well. |
by Em
Kasie, I too have been away from here for some time and recently rejoined back last year which I am glad I did as there are some wonderful people on this site. Your poem speaks volumes to me and no doubt many others. |
by Kasie
Thank you. I couldn't have said it better myself. Also, thank you for pointing out my spelling errors, I have corrected them. I am always open to criticism, that's how I get better. |
by Imperfection
Brilliant poem I surfer with depression and anxiety so I understand in some levels I know everyone isn't the same it effects ppl in different ways but we can be strong together I believe that's the only way |
by Kasie
Thank you, and I agree with you. I wish you all the best. |
by mossgirl19
This is raw and rhymed well. Forget about bullies they are the insecure hehe. |
by Kasie
Thank you, I've learned to just smile at them. It annoys them, but they leave you alone after that. |
by MoonMaiden
Girl, This I can feel for you on as i too striggle with. Every line was packed with emotional depths. Trying to find the courage to pull through another day, battling not one but 2 sets of demons everyday with everything done. Anyways, very relatable but the peive was written well. The flow was kind of shaky in my opinion but dont give up. Im here if you need to vent or just talk (: its nice to know we arent alone whether we wanna be or not |
by Kasie
Thank you for your kind criticism and for letting me know you are there. I know this isn't my best work and have been working on making my writing better. |