Great piece! No one should ever be told that they can't be themselves. I really enjoyed reading this because so many people go around unhappy trying to be someone they aren't just because society or family deems them unacceptable or different. Love yourself for who you are and not how others think you should be.

Yakari, this is yet another fantastic, though provoking write and the title intrigued me as I wondered why write for 'loud girls' because surely they can speak for themselves, right?

1/ This is a deep and powerful opening which seems to answer my question of why you would write for the loud girls and it's because their mothers fear nobody will want them but why??

2/ We can all dream but yes, some more than others though I feel no one should be told they are dreaming too big because dreams are what we make them and some are achievable.

3/ Just because people have a 'loud' personality does not mean they aren't 'soft' or 'vulnerable' because I feel these kinds of people are the most vulnerable to heartache and bullying.

4/ Now, I realise that 'loud' is for the larger woman and you know what we should be ourselves no matter what anybody tells us to say, do, think or feel...

Don't listen.
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Yes, yes, yes do not listen to negativity.

5/ Powerful stuff, loved it.

Em