Child of mine (Double Etheree)

by Kasie   Jan 5, 2017


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~Dear~

~precious~

~child of mine~

~my pride and joy~

~rare gift from above~

~heaven-sent my dear boy~

~With innocent eyes of brown~

~you glare upon me, your mother~

~embracing you within my warm arms~

~knowing my love for you will never drown~

~My heart will always beat for you my child~

~Watching you sleep soundly in my arms~

~while laying a kiss on your head~

~whispering I love you son~

~no star will ever shine~

~more radiant than~

~my love for you~

~for you are~

~my dear~

~son.~
~

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  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Kasie, such a wonderfully loving write for your son. I loved the double Etheree! Beautifully done-

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Kasie,

    this is the first poem I read from you. .. I can say that your piece is so expressive it made me read it back 3rd. ..darn! I like the form...and the poem is a lovely dedication for your son... A loving mother in deed. ..

    ~whispering I love you son~

    ~no star will ever shine~

    ^^^
    my favourite lines

    Well done and will be waiting for more from you

    Gel :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you so much. This was an easy write, for he is the light of my life. Also, I tried to make it look like a shining star by putting the squiggly lines by it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Oh, Kasie, I am literally, Jumping up and down and have the biggest silly smile spread across my face!

    This is a lovely double Etheree and a tribute to a wonderful son. Bravo!

    I am all out of nominations, but if you remind me next week, you can have one.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I sent you a pm before I realized you commented. But on another note, this is only the second time I have written one. Surprisingly they come easy to me. And I am honored by your comment. Thank you again.

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