Michael.. such love.
I feeel it deeply in this piece. Again with the spacing. Well done.

Thank you, again Deeply.

I find love poems much easier than darker ones. I need to write the darker ones off the back of a negative experience, whereas love, is just there. Vomit inducing I know, but there you have it!

Thank you for reading any taking time out to comment.

Michael x

Michael, another wonderful sonnet and it's nice that other people are trying these too and I look forward to being able to mastering these someday especially with help from the sonnet master classes :) I do like how you space these out, I'm not sure if it's your intention or not but it lets me digest what has been said fully.

1/ I love this opening it's pretty sweet because (I feel) you're saying I could send out a message in a hit air balloon or take you for a hot air balloon ride (don't ask why I though this though I feel it's romantic) but would there be any point because the clouds would mask your true intentions thud ending in tears so to speak.

2/ Again, you could get birds to hug your love songs but vultures would take them away.. I feel this has a deeper meaning though and the vultures' could be those jealous people intent on ruining things though probably wrong.

3/ This is so sweet because you will write your love for this person with blood, sweat and tears gone into them and they will be indelible - hard to remove or not easy to forget because they are such pure words with a lot of meaning behind them.

Couplet/ A lovely ending that your love will always shine through in writing, maybe you're not good with words like me so writing helps too I'm not sure.

Gets a 10 from Em :)

Beautiful, yet again. I don't know how you do it, but you do it well.

Hi sir ,

you never failed to empress me with yar cute layout. ...Very artistic. ..

To share my love with you forever more,

I shall release the words my heart doth sing;
^^^
---How sweet Mr. Darcy. ..I can feel how you love this person

In ink and verse my river flows so pure

Indelible - for you this paper ring.
^^
nice choice of words from you w/c I adore ..I like the imaginary. ..actually these line are so powerful. ..thought t'was the end

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To show my lasting love for you this day,

A sonnet sings my song for you always.

^^^
then followed by these another powerful lines. ...
Love is so powerful it can make the little thing to see, to hear and to sing. ... isn't it amazing?

Well done
a standing ovation for this.

Gel

Michael, such a sweet love sonnet. I love all your sweet descriptives, it just adds that whimsy to this. Well done-

Michael,

Not sure how I must this but it is a simply stunning little sonnet and the couplet is marvellous, sprinkled with some mesmerising alliteration.

Well done indeed on this,

Ben