by Courtney Hough Jan 5, 2017
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In this wasteland i scream, |
by Kasie
Beautifully written, I feel it conveys strong emotions of impending death. I love the spacing between each line it is pleasing to the eyes. Also, if you don't mind me saying, I just wanted to point out that on the second line, I believe there is a typo ( no on(e) around for miles). Also, have you tried centering the poem? Either way, it is a lovely piece. 5/5 well done |
Oh thanks for pointing that out! |