by Larry Chamberlin Jan 6, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Much was important |
by Phil
Very true, we will all eventually have that one person we couldn't live without then we will wonder how we survived many years without them. |
by Theoretical Thespian
That's so sweet. This is a beautiful piece, and with all the lines and syllables this form permitted you to have, a lot went into this. |
by Brenda
Larry, so sweet. I know myself could not exist without my other half. |
by Ben Pickard
Larry, |
by Em
Larry, this is a beautiful piece and though the form only allows so many lines and syllables you did it delicately and alot went into this. |
Your sense is the centerpiece of the poem, em. |