Michael, here we have a wonderful dedication to your sister and family should always be so close but sometimes they aren't. I get on with my family but sometimes me and one of my sisters fight like cat and dog not literally but we have our differences of opinions unfortunately though we do love each other. Anyway quit rambling to the poem...

I like your choice to put it in the love section as these are usually used for all the lovey dovey stuff bit here we have a bond of unconditional love that should never be broken.

1/ I like this opening as it reminds me of when me and my sisters would share secrets and nobody else knew and I guess the 'moments' are the good and bad as we all have those.

2/ This shows you think highly of your sister and probably likewise because she helped you in your darkest hour to pull you through and when you have both been heartbroken, you can depend on each other. I think pin in the second line should be pain though.

3/ Here, again we see that you being able to depend on her love and care helps you through and that despite any mistakes you may have made she is there by your side.

4/ Loved, loved, loved this as it shows (I feel) that no matter what your bond is unbreakable.

5/ Truly beautiful ending.

All the best,
Em

The pleasures mine

Hello Michael,

your sister is lucky to have such an openly sensitive brother. From reading this you are lucky too, for your sister sounds wonderful.

I lost mine a few years ago and I can honestly say that not a day goes by when I don't wish she was here again, even for a day.

Enjoy and take care.