Comments : Your heart beat (acrostic)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    You will soon be rivalling Em for the award of 'most poems posted in a year', lol.

    In all seriousness, though, this is a beautiful little acrostic that was a joy to read.
    I haven't done one of these for ages, so I think I will try my hand some time.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Lol thank you, I have insomnia so I write a couple poems every night.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Absolutely loving the layout. It's nice to see a creatively presented and written acrostic.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I tried to make the ending sound like a heartbeat when you read it.

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Kasie,

    Your heart beat? hmmmn a tasteful acrostic here. .. I love it.. The opening was very powerful..as well as the closing. ..keep it up. ..

    5/5

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you