Comments : Sweet Angel (revised)

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautifully sad.

    All the best.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Kasie

    Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    This seems too personal not to be literal so if it is, you have my sincerest sympathy. If not, it is a wonderfully written and powerful piece anyway.
    That is all I have for this - accomplished writing.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you. She was my sister (technically my older sister) I never had the chance to meet her. She passed before I was born, she was 2 at the time. I used the way my dad felt to write this. I guess you could say my dad and I collaborated on this. I used the term little sister because she was little when she passed.