The Old Man

by JaM Jan 9, 2017 category : Life, society / other

The stale air lingers,
Emptiness surrounds his heart,
Death is near, waiting.

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7 years ago
by Em

This is epic... Says so much in so little.
Em
- 7 years ago
  by JaM
  
  <3 thank you
7 years ago
by Ben Pickard

A dark little senryu here which captures the essence of someone's final moments in this world very well indeed.

All the best,

Ben
- 7 years ago
  by JaM
  
  Thank you.