Comments : Stars and grappling hooks (sonnet)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    I have read over this and can conclusively say that it is written in iambic pentameter throughout; you've mastered this difficult technique very quickly.

    As to the title you weren't sure of, what about something like 'stars and grappling hooks'. It just struck me as a bit different.
    Entirely up to you.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, I was having a little trouble with it. Thank you I love the title you suggested.

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Well done, Kasie.

    I am glad Ben steered you in the right direction. After all, those seas can be tricky to define; like a still sea on a clear day.

    Great title :O)

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you. Like I stated before, you and Ben have helped me a lot when it comes to these. Ben helped pick out the title, I seem to have a little trouble coming up with creative titles.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    You've really took a shine to this form. Well done for you. I hope I take to them as well as you have.

    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you. I still have much to learn, but it's not as intimidating as it looks. My advice is to never stop trying and I am positive that you can do it too.