by Ben Pickard
This is excellent. Obviously, I loved the story throughout but the ending was great. Dark and well rhymed and fluent to read. |
Hi, |
_double comment_ |
by Em
First things first.. I looked up the word queef and had to laugh at the definition it came out with... I'm guessing it doesn't mean that though it would be quite funny if it did anyway to the full poem. |
by Naughtymouse
Epic, deliciously dark and your word choice and meter are spot on and the imagery is fantastic!!! |