Comments : Untitled - January 10, 2017

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Luce,
    bravo on this I liked it. .

    consciously unconscious
    ^^^^
    this lines says enough. .

    Well done
    Nominated
    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Luce, just wonderful! Wow, my head is spinning over digesting this amazing write-

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Luce, firstly I would like to say wow and I am glad it's nominated as I am all out. This is mind blowing stuff and really makes you think.

    1/ What a fabulous, hopeful beginning which would be even better if we open a curtain and see what the future holds but then again, would we really want to lol?

    2/ Fantastic.. The bed I feel is just stuff getting in the way of your dreams, of being able to do the stuff you have always wanted and though they are in your grasp you can't quite keep hold of them.. I know how this feels.

    3/ If only blankets had these powers I would be under mine forever lol.

    4/ Depression can do this to us though I'm not sure this is what this is about, I'm stumped here lol.

    5/ I love this and it makes me think that you are now able to realise the mistakes you have made (and we all make them) and begin learning from them.

    6/ And I think we should all live each day as it comes because none of us know what's around the corner.

    7/ Wasn't expecting that ending but (and I feel this is what this means) death comes to us all though I don't think I'd like to be consciously unconscious... I imagine the soul floating around watching events unfold though.

    Kudos.
    Em