Comments : The Fateful Dance pt2

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is so relatable to me... It's such a contrast to part 1 but still very well rhymed
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, It's not my best though. I'm having a little trouble being creative.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Kasie, this is very hard to read, let alone how hard it must have been to write.. I am glad you escaped such a terrible situation! I do know plenty of people who stay because they arent sure what else to do and find it embarrassing or try and justify it.. Well done..

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you. I am forever grateful because I had a friend that was there for me and still is. If it wasn't for her, I would of never had the courage to leave.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Kasie, this is very hard to read, let alone how hard it must have been to write.. I am glad you escaped such a terrible situation! I do know plenty of people who stay because they arent sure what else to do and find it embarrassing or try and justify it.. Well done..