Nothing to you (senryu)

by Kasie Jan 14, 2017 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships

The love we once shared
Was so meaningless to you,
You just never cared.

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7 years ago
by deeplydesturbed

Kasie - fantastic! Love that you not only got so much in such a short space, but the powerful message behind it and that it rhymed! Well done!
- 7 years ago
  by Kasie
  
  Thank you
7 years ago
by Brenda

Well done on this senryu. Its sad how common it is, one person giving their all and the other person just being there.
- 7 years ago
  by Kasie
  
  Thank you, and I agree. Sometimes you just feel like a pawn in someone else's world.
7 years ago
by Em

Wow. This is fantastic and rhymed too.
Well done
- 7 years ago
  by Kasie
  
  Thank you
7 years ago
by Ben Pickard

Kasie,

I don't have much spare time today, so just a quick 'well done' on this senryu and all the best,

Ben
- 7 years ago
  by Kasie
  
  Thank you

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