Comments : Nothing to you (senryu)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kasie,

    I don't have much spare time today, so just a quick 'well done' on this senryu and all the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow. This is fantastic and rhymed too.
    Well done

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Well done on this senryu. Its sad how common it is, one person giving their all and the other person just being there.

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you, and I agree. Sometimes you just feel like a pawn in someone else's world.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Kasie - fantastic! Love that you not only got so much in such a short space, but the powerful message behind it and that it rhymed! Well done!

    • 7 years ago

      by Kasie

      Thank you