Tears (Form - Acrostic)

by Augustus Black   Jan 16, 2017


Tears fall silently like floods and do not clear
encroaching dark clouds fill my life with fear.
Agony from heartbreak is too much to take.
Remorse from regret is a painful mistake.
Sorrow has poisoned my mind like a snake.

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I stumbled upon a gem. I liked it very much. You have a way with formed poetry! Great write.

  • 7 years ago

    by Belle

    I love it, the words blend nicely. Good job.

    -Belle

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I'm glad Em nominated this one. .. I like this acrostic ,words perfectly fit to it's acronym....

    well Done

    Gel

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    One word: Nominated.
    Also, It's hard to find the words in these forms sometimes and to rhyme them too is even harder, you did both.

    Well done.
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Oh, thank you very much, you are very sweet and soft.
      Well..yes, it was difficult. Thanks again. Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this form. I often write these when I can't find the words. Here you have not only found the words for this acrostic of 'tears', but you've manage to rhyme them too.

    "Sorrow has poisoned my mind like a snake."
    ^
    I liked this line - nice simile.

    Well done, good job!

    • 7 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Sir - Thanks a lot for the uplifting comment.

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