i didnt understand what it was about...

Hey Nikki,
I am sorry to hear bout your friend. I have lost 3 friends to suicide! It's a hard thing to get over and through! But, stay strong and all. As hard as it may seem to get through, you will make it if you just try a little. I will be praying for you, cause I know just how hard it is!!! KEEP STRONG and keep the AMAZING TALENT up!!! Lots Of Love!!!

-Carrie-

hey nikki , sorry u have to feel all the pain... i know the feeling, coz i too lost a very dear friend...
a very powerful poem =) i can feel every lil inch of ur pain...
hope u pass by mine and read "destiny"(hersuicide note)... thank u :)

Wow. That was a very intense, very powerful poem. I really enjoyed er, well to tell you the truth, it made me so sad that I can't say I enjoyed it. It was really good though. I think you should capitalize all your "i"s to make this poem gramatically stronger. Another error I found was in the line when you said "your one of my closest friends". It should be you're, not your.

babe SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD loved it so much without a doubt this has got to be one of your bestest ever poems (cept the ones u write to me lol) keep it up luv ya
*~*jessycar*~*

trully beautiful. I would think writing this helped with your pain? xx

Omg thats so sad but cute that bought tears to my eyes i love it

you have my vote =]