Kasie,

This is excellent and I love the form. To be honest, I don't think I've heard of it but I love the rhyme scheme here.

Well done.

I honestly didn't even notice the rhyme scheme. Must be because its been done so well. Sometimes it comes out forced but I didn't seem so at all.

Imagery in this is amazing. Excellent write.

Kasie, another sad, emotion filled yet relatable and well written piece as always.

1/ I absolutely love the opening imagery here because I imagine a girl heartbroken, in pain or just depressed standing still crying and no sooner as her tears fall the rain washes them away and it's like they were never there in the first place, if that makes sense.

2/ Again, some good imagery of words swirling your head like the storm your stood in and being unable to stop them so you stand still (maybe hoping the time will too) and wonder about things, why they happened and especially why they happened to you possibly.

3/ Loved this as it's a little optimistic because even of you have a storm swirling inside like the storm outside you will not let it get to you because deep down you know you're strong and brave and that you will overcome this.

Couplet/ Beautiful ending and one that many of us can adhere too because we all should take each day as it comes and be strong enough to forget the pain and stop the tears but how can we as these things make us who we are today.

Another great write.
Em

Kasie! I love this form. Excellent rhyming.. well done