by Ben Pickard
Meena, |
by William Mae
What a beautiful and wonderful write. You set to poetry the feelings of so many people's heart. Who among us had not yearned and wanted and yes even needed to say more to enlighten others of our feelings. I dare say we all have. Beautiful write |
by Brenda
Meena, what a neat form, I have never seen before. Beautifully written, very lush in its descriptive. I really liked this a lot. Well done- |
by Em
Meena, I have never heard of this form before so I am glad of the footnote as I see a few of us would be and though I haven't seen it done before yours seemed to be done perfectly and read smooth so well done on that. |
by Mr. Darcy
Meena, my dear. I have read the criteria and it seems you are missing a stanza. I know its a big ask, but could you add a stanza? |
by Meena Krish
Oh shoot you are right I'm missing a stanza!! Gosh I've |
by Jyoti Rawat
nice poem |
Beautiful write !!!! |
by William Mae
I had to come back and read this again, it only gets more beautiful, |
by William Mae
Yes I came back and read this again, it's so beautiful |