Note - this is not how I intended this poem to be presented. Perhaps, this snow covered rubble is as 'good as it gets'?

I like it.

Michael, for some reason this made me well up firstly because of how well written it was and secondly because I can feel the emotion throughout and I feel it's something more than just the rebuilding of a house but of yourself, maybe and if so, I can totally relate as I feel many of us especially on here can. I saw your comment to Luce on how this wasn't meant to look like this or whatever and you know what I actually like how it's fallen, for me it gives it that edge.
I feel home to all of us is completely different. My home is now my sanctuary and like you i can be anything i want to be (usually wonder woman, wondering where everything is haha) but once it used to be a place where I was petrified to even breath incase I did it wrongly and nobody should have to live like that... But I guess nobody knows what happens behind closed doors, if only we did. Then again, would we do anything to help? Sorry rambling..
I like how when the builders come and start wrecking the joint, leaving things wherever they like and making a mess that they ruin your sanctuary and leaving you with only memories because thats what (I feel) real homes are about making good memories and of course some bad because we all have those too and though these builders are coming back to build this new home you question (as we all would) will it be the same, will I settle in etc.. I feel this isn't just about the building of a house though but building trust, friendships.. I'm not sure.
As always a fabulous piece.
Em

Michael,

Well done on another great piece. I love the layout. I'm sure this is intended to mean something else... But at the moment, when I read this all I can think about is the changes to the site.

Mr Darcy,
Well done. I love the way you have expressed how the site is (or at least was) your sanctuary. I believe a LOT of people think this way..

Well done.

As always Michael, your poems are always very interesting to read and thought provoking!
You certainly have a very creative way with words that I simply love!!