Comments : I tried to paint you pictures

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is interesting. It has an odd sort of flow, but I think that is what got your personality into the piece. And your title drew me in effortlessly, and your word choice was basic, yet I find it hard to believe anything more indepth would not have been as effective for your message.

    • 7 years ago

      by Avrii Monrielle

      Thank you BlueJay... as each new day dawns, I keep discovering love is more complex than I thought the day before. This piece is pretty much my anger, frustration expressed in calamity as I felt myself teetering on the edge of madness...

    • 7 years ago

      by Avrii Monrielle

      Arguing with my loved one, really did that to me that day in particular.