The flow to this piece is a little awkward, but I like the imagery you used and the style that comes from your own unique voice. There are a lot of really awesome elements to this piece, and a handful that honestly let me down.

"What does one do when one discovers
soul mates do not exist
Did we really live?
Did we really cry?
Who are we?"

^ This stanza in particular left me rereading it hoping for something a little more stunning buried beneath the surface. The repetition annoyed me to the point of losing interest in the piece.

Otherwise this piece was decent. I hope to read more from you, especially if it has such interesting images again!