Your tenses in this piece flip flopped a lot, and that confused me so much that I really lost interest in this piece overall. Which really disheartened me because I was so interested in the title and the fact that a rhyming poem didn't feel too corny even though it was very clearly forced.

Sorry I can't give too much more feedback, but this piece really lost me.

Some girls are heartless and to find the one that isn't we have to search, often it takes awhile but that's life.

I perfectly understand your sentiments here, Mahesh. I can feel the hurt you have felt.

Oh, about blue jay's comment, I do believe she said those not to make you feel bad. People can sometimes suggest something...which can be good!

Cheer up...this is a good piece.

Some girls are greedy. Finest poem.