Love the line breaks in this! It makes it so intimate and gives focus to how precious this person/model/inspiration is. How they have molded you into who you are today. I find such deep meaning in this, great work! |
by Brenda
A lovely tribute to a special someone. Well done- |
by Em
Aegis, this is another perfect write by you and one that makes you think about the different directions it can go in so to speak which is what I love about your poetry as it make look easy on the eye but if you think about it there's so much more to it in my opinion. |
by Aegis
The statues were just my way of cementing their existence into something long lasting. But I'm also a maniac haha. Nevertheless, you were pretty spot on as always |
I'm guessing that this poem is a tribute to someone? She must be very special, and your words give her that justice. Well done! |