No.1

by Gretta   Feb 7, 2017


Tears refuse to fall
Locked in the eyes,
Rope of pain
Choking my neck,
No sound but the night
Hope to die, to live..
And fly..
As my dreams, away.

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  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is interesting. It has an odd style to it, but that actually seems to work well here. Welcome to PnQ and I hope that you are able to blossom here 0r maybe just figure yourself out a bit more clearly.

    This piece tells its story in a very roundabout way. There is not a lot of emotion and there are not too many descriptions in this, and yet it comes across as a very closed off tale about pain. This made it relatelable to more people, but I don't think that was your goal.

    Anyway, I have mixed feelings on this piece, but it shows potential, and I'd love to read more from you.

    • 5 years ago

      by Gretta

      I was going through something that time..
      And now I figured out how to reply tbh.
      Thanks a lot anyways.

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