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by arsalan   Feb 10, 2017


life, francium in action
unstable to the point of disaster

so many ups and downs it's no wonder I'm senseless
'till I see the razor blade and I feel it tremendous
I put it to my skin and let it feel hypodermis

I see the red but I feel the best of my moments
I feel pain but I rather not feel my emotions
my only escape, I use it to flee the moment

the razor blade, what sinister, beautiful supporter
my psychiatrist dont bother stopping me from it
my mind's gone, I no longer see no opponents
life's an endless road, looking for a cliff to drive off it

-I'm not too sure about this one, the wording just feels.... awkward. tell me what ya'll think

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  • 7 years ago

    by Shruti

    Hello,
    true, life is full of ups and downs, and sometimes they become unbearable. But one should not lose hope.
    It's a good one. Not awkward.
    Umm, if you wish, you can try using some punctuation to make the flow more smooth. It's just a suggestion.
    Overall, I love this!
    Keep writing.:)