by Satish Verma Feb 13, 2017
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Again you made friends, words |
by Sunshine
This really a very interesting piece, there is a lot to it than it shows, the first parts are powerful and loud, however if I must be honest, something was lost in the last stanza, it felt as though you were wearied out, I suggest you could revise it and pull it up to the level of the parts before it. |