Vent

by Ren   Feb 14, 2017


Mind aches,
Heart breaks-
Bad day,
Go away.

Times lost,
High cost-
Stress is high,
Life’s a lie.

Break down,
No sound-
Going crazy?
Yeah, maybe.

Feeling down,
Wear a frown-
What’s a smile?
It’s been awhile.

Lend an ear?
They can’t hear-
Too bad,
So sad.

Life goes on,
Til we’re gone…

Find a way,
To get through-
Grab a pen,
Make it true.

Spill it out,
Til there’s no more-
A creative chance,
To open the door.

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by Lost One

    Reminds me of the short answers you would actually give when you're feeling like this. I know when my temper flares I tend to say a lot more with less.

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting Tony :) I appreciate it!

  • 7 years ago

    by pmmurphy

    I like the message, the poem is nice. Its just i have read (and written) many poems like this. I'm not a huge fan of the rhyme scheme with short lines. But i kept reading. The poem has good content and i enjoyed my read. Just sharing my thoughts and constructive crit

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! I appreciate your honesty and for taking the time to read and comment! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by pmmurphy

    i double posted sorry

  • 7 years ago

    by nani

    I absolutely love the way you write this. I've read it over and over again!

    Nani

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Nani! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael

    Powerful peice Ren,always good to grab a pen :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

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