by Ben Pickard
I love the needled metaphor in the last couple of lines. |
by miracle
Thank you for the praise my spell check doesn't always catch on. Ill edit it. I havnt been writing much. I'm a little rusty. |
by Mr. Darcy
I like this poem. It has a 'calm before the storm' feel to it. Careful description of the scene, the addiction calling.. whispering to a will that is crumbling, knowing that it'll succumb to the inevitable. |
by miracle
Thank you for your kind words! I will edit it and fix thoes. I! A little rusty. |
Very briefly written, yet so powerful and amazingly explained the addiction part!! I totally loved it! |
Nice work Miracle! A powerful piece well worth reading! I liked it. |