Peter, |
by Hellon
For some reason I got the feeling that you were talking about an elderly person who's confused about what happened to their loved one. Perhaps someone with dementia? Someone who would find it hard to comprehend exactly what's happening. Just my thoughts on this lovely, though tragic, story. |
by Ben Pickard
Peter - another lovely verse from you which I read yesterday and have just come back to. |
Thank you Ben, Hellon and deeplydesturbed for your kind comments. |
by Mr. Darcy
I'm in tears |
Such a beautiful poem and it touched my heart. Be blessed Peter |
by Naughtymouse
Sir, I believe this is the first I have read from you and I have to say that it was a gripping from the first line, flow and word choice are spot on I'm so glad I stopped by. |
by Em
Peter, I always love your writes. They are emotional and more or less always reduce me to tears and this was no different. I guess many people can relate. |
Beautiful poem I love it. |