Comments : Inside My Head

  • 7 years ago

    by Kasie

    Wow great write. The description was on point. I felt like I was within your mind hearing the screams. It's almost haunting. It's almost like being trapped within yourself. Once again well done

  • 7 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    An interesting poem Vortex. Your words made me feel like I was inside your head.
    A well written, descriptive piece. I love the last line, 'And I’m still screaming.'
    That says it all.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Scream loud enough and some one might just about hear us, right,?