Do You Think Of Me Poem (Monchielle Stanza)

by Abstract Poet   Feb 22, 2017


Do you think of me in
your dreams looking up at the
heavens seeing me there waving hello
to you I am a beautiful angel
in your dreams with beautiful powers?.

Do you think of me when
you look up at the stars?
Do you see my face shining
brightly in the sky smiling back
at you saying I love you?.

Do you think of me when
it dose rain lightly it falls
on your eyelids? do you see
my face crying tears of sadness
of rain falling down on you?.

Do you think of me when
you are standing on highest mountain tops
screaming out my name? do you
see my face in these clouds
speaking to you with every word?.

P.S. I don't follow directions on
Monchielle Stanza I don't
understand iambic feet or using
counting symbols too hard.

That's why I do it my own way

P.S.S. don't worry I have infor on
Monchielle Stanza.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Hellon

    I'm always wary of commenting on new members poetry now for fear of offending but...this is the description I've found of this style and...apart from repeating the first line in each stanza you have not followed the other guidelines.

    http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/monchielle.html

    It is an nice poem as is though, so I'd suggest you just remove Monchielle from the title?

  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Though the repetition here was slightly annoying, I think that you did an interesting job of getting your point across and venting out everything it was you needed to know from this person or experience.