by Abstract Poet Feb 27, 2017
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Chorus: |
by BlueJay
There is an extremely interesting use of voice in this piece and I really enjoy that fact. Though the form of this is a little bit awkward it was creative and I suppose I can appreciate the beauty in creativity; however, a little more fluidity would make this more songlike to a reader. |
It is a song did u see where it came from? Blue Jay |