Comments : iii

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I like what's been left out of this poem as much as what you've included, if that makes sense.

    Well done.

    All the very best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by E. J. Iverson

      Thank you, Ben. It makes total sense what you said; I'm glad that you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work.

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    I see what Ben says. There's so much you leave to the reader to figure out. Beautifully expressed.

    • 7 years ago

      by E. J. Iverson

      Thanks for the comment, Poetess. I appreciate you taking the time to read my work and comment.

  • 7 years ago

    by Britt

    Dear heavens. Thank you for writing something that has allowed me to insert my own "stuff", and be able to connect on a "me, too" sort of level. <3

    • 7 years ago

      by E. J. Iverson

      I'm glad that you could relate, Britt. Well, not glad about the struggles, but glad that you have a level of understanding and connection. Life is rough sometimes and poetry is such a wonderful way to connect through empathy.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow..