Oh damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is powerful!!!

Love, love, love this poem!!!!

Holy moly Michael,
You truley have written a gem today!

Wow, very deep, your visuals are spot on. Very cool write-well done!

Thank you for your lovely comments. They mean so much

Michael

Ditto to what Andrea said...lol

This is excellent, Michael!!!

I like the darkness of this, it speaks of instincts and desires yet choices and suppression.

It's what I love about poetry, it can be written as one thing but it means something else to another.

Fantastic words