Comments : Erosion

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very good piece. I am only sorry that I have no nominations left this week!

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Shruti

    There is always such tenderness to your poems. A soft beauty.
    Great word choice too and the flow is so smooth.
    Soulful yet lovely.
    Great write! :)
    ~S

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    So beautiful, so very sad too. So much longing for your lost love-well done-