Great write, just spotted two errors:

"I also discover I needing their love too"
^ it should be "I also discover that I'm needing their love too"

"That the way it should be , love needed each other"
^it should be "That's the way it should be, love needing each other"

This has a lovely message I think because we all have a soul mate out there, we just need to fond them no natter how long it takes