by BlueJay
All I can really say about this is that your use of syntax was actually quite powerful and without it I don't think your mood would have been established even half as clearly. |
by CJ Maleney
This actually started out as something completely different but in that alcoholic fog it warped into what you now read |
by Em
Craig, another great write with fabulous rhyming that just seems to be as smooth as glass until it's broken lol. The rhyming is unforced and the content well you hit the nail on the head with the title on this one. Words can be very powerful weapons and usually we say some very hurtful things when we're angry and sometimes we say them without realising the full affect they have. |
by CJ Maleney
This was actually started and finished very quickly, as most of my stuff is. When in the right mood things just flow out. |