by CJ Maleney Mar 13, 2017
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
His time has past and he is gone |
by Hope
I feel the misjudgment of the character in this poem, keep writing. Love the poem. |
by Naughtymouse
Lol I don't believe you and I know I can already say that there are alot of writers here that are glad you came to play |
by Em
Craig, (Ben) naughtymouse seemed to hit the nail on the this and like him my attention can waver on something I don't like or get but your pieces always draw me in an sleep me captivated from start to finish. |
by CJ Maleney
I'm lulling you both inundated false sense of security, wait till I post my rubbish ones lol |
by Naughtymouse
My attention span can sometimes wonder when it's not supposed to but to be perfectly honest this had me gripped to the end, punctuation was spot on in this write and controls the reader nicely, great word choice and defo something I'll be coming back to read again. Syrup will love this! ( Maple Tree) |
by CJ Maleney
Cheers, was just having a bit of fun with this one, |
by Liz
I've read this quite a few times. I love the story. A very enjoyable read! |
by CJ Maleney
Thank you, I quite enjoyed writing it too. It's nice to get away from the serious sometimes |