Comments : The King Of Hell

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I've been watching far to much supernatural lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    I've read this quite a few times. I love the story. A very enjoyable read!

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you, I quite enjoyed writing it too. It's nice to get away from the serious sometimes

      Regards

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    My attention span can sometimes wonder when it's not supposed to but to be perfectly honest this had me gripped to the end, punctuation was spot on in this write and controls the reader nicely, great word choice and defo something I'll be coming back to read again. Syrup will love this! ( Maple Tree)

    Great job fella.

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers, was just having a bit of fun with this one,

      Craig

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Craig, (Ben) naughtymouse seemed to hit the nail on the this and like him my attention can waver on something I don't like or get but your pieces always draw me in an sleep me captivated from start to finish.
    Take care, Em

    • 7 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I'm lulling you both inundated false sense of security, wait till I post my rubbish ones lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Lol I don't believe you and I know I can already say that there are alot of writers here that are glad you came to play

  • 7 years ago

    by Hope

    I feel the misjudgment of the character in this poem, keep writing. Love the poem.