by CJ Maleney Mar 15, 2017
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
It seeks him, he's known it has for years |
by BlueJay
Though this piece is a little bit on the lengthy side, I understand you were probably just getting it out of your system, and that's one of the amazing things poetry offers us. Believe me, I've had my fair share of long, poorly flowing, formatted with insanity pieces, but this one still speaks to me. It has a very specific word choice and that speaks volumes to me. Both about you and your works. Again, the rhymes were... odd but they were not terribly horrific - they simply felt required in your mind (at least that's what I'm guessing). |
by CJ Maleney
Nah I'm gonna leave it as it is as I enjoyed the process, and I don't like editing things, I feel that by doing so I mess with usually usually flowed quite raw. The only time I do is to remove the odd expletive or sometimes lots of them lol. |
by CJ Maleney
OK it's long and doesn't flow perfectly but it was fun to play with this |