Comments : If I, would you?

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An imploring sort of love poem which is nicely penned and well rhymed. Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Dill

      Thanks Ben! Wish you the best!

  • 7 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    wawo very nice.

    • 7 years ago

      by Dill

      Thanks! I thought it was nice too!

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This poem rocks. Period.

    I'm.a suckered for love poems and 80% of my own are so when I read them I'm usually super critical but I live this write really nice format and your phrasing is perfect, this is the first I've read from you and I look forward to more!

    The other Ben.

    • 7 years ago

      by Dill

      Thanks Ben! I look forward to posting more!