Such raw catharsis. Appreciate the honesty of this one. Also, the speaker's belief in the restorative power of love. It' s heartening to see.

I really liked this a lot. It's raw and powerful with the regret aND sadness. I really liked how you described the broken cement and a watery flow of emotions springing up, keeping with the babbling brook , very fluid with the way that was written. Well done-