Comments : Dreams

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda - what lovely dreams! your vivid description in this piece is spot on. it flows very well and i almost found myself humming the words as i went along.. i imagine this in some sort of nursery rhyme book :)

    Well done!

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Nams, thank you so much. Usually my dreams are pretty darn weird, I liked this one, lol.

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda, in our dreams we can be anything which makes dreams so good until we have nightmares. I absolutely loved the images and rhyming in this.
    Em x
    Nominated for sure.

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you so much Em! Yeah, that's the fun thing or bad thing about dreams, the sky is the limit. No nightmares please, hugs my dear-

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A bit of rhyme and fantasy - how could I possibly help but love this poem, Brenda?
    When I was younger, I used to love reading fantasy novels by authors such as Tolkien and Terry Brooks, but now I home school the kids, I seem to be buried in Shakespeare, Twain and Austin the whole time, readying myself for when they're ready to learn it (Although we have done Tom Sawyer).
    Anyway, I ramble. This brought back some wonderful memories and sparked my imagination like fantasy always seems to.

    Take care, Brenda

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Ben, thank you so much! Myou sister has read and reread the Hobbit series multiple times. I really do like the magical works, it's fun to immerse in them. Tom Sawyer is a good story to read. I remember reading that in school too. Hemingway is another fascinating author. He spent a lot of time in the U.P. fishing and wrote about that, it was neat to connect such a literary giant with our small towns up north.

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I think we all dream of this beautiful far away dream where we can
    be anything we want and have the luxury of a smiling heart where what
    you wish comes to you...

    I liked how you have penned this...its got a happy rhythm that just pulls
    the reader into this read...lovely!

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Meena, thank you so much! I like dreams like this too. Sure beats those nightmarish ones.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Brenda, this is such a sweet and magical write! You had me smiling and imagining this extraordinary world the entire time. I wish I had dreams like this!!
    Wonderful job! :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Ren, thank you so much. It's funny, I started this write a bit back and stalled and picked it back up and just flowed out. I like having dreams like this too, so much fun.

  • 7 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    I love this! Great imagery and the flow was perfect!

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Courtney, thank you so much! I appreciate you!