Comments : Broken Beats on Empty Streets

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    This is fantastic and I think your first rhyming piece though maybe my memory serves me wrong. I truly hope this is nominated as I can't but it needs recognition.
    Take care, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Woah. Great write. Truly heartbreaking.
    I hope whoever this is for.. reads it

    • 5 years ago

      by Aegis

      I just noticed this comment. As far as I know, she'll never read it. And that's honestly probably for the best:) It's about my ex wife and we definitely don't talk anymore lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Nominated. this is an awesome write and should be front page....sorry dude that's all i got....epicness.

    let's hope the judges can comment more

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Aegis

      Thank you so much! Had a lot of down time this week and decided to put it to good use:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Ok, officially blown away by this. This is the hallmark of destroyed relationships. I'm sorry for your pain but you nailed it! Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    I agree with everyone...this is truly an amazing write through and through, and your rhyming is flawless! Amazing job!

  • 7 years ago

    by Bewitched

    Wow !! Truly wow !!

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win! I was blown away when I first read it, still am!

  • 7 years ago

    by Liz

    Congrats on the well-deserved win

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win! :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Wallflower friend

    Wow, this is a nice poem. It's really well written. Good job on the win!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Aegis my first I guess to read a long poem from you. Wow, really I am blown away you have perfect rhyming here. Amazing poem, going into my favorites!