by Em
As always with your writes this is fantastic. |
by Bewitched
A short poem but speaks volumes in essence |
I was not prepared for this piece! I LOVE the brevity. It took my breath away yet at the same time I craved more. The sound of "brittle bones" said aloud was somehow satisfying. Just the depth of what that means. From one end, I can see this being a person, yet I can also imagine this as being the name of a feeling, of a loss. The toxic part reminded me of Britney Spear's "toxic" (I know, way off topic). |
by hiraeth
I'm glad my poem was inspiration for this, like everyone else said, you've nailed this! Short yet gut-punching! |