Comments : I'm Drowning in Your Grace

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    If I'm honest I'm atheist but this was really well done and I like the subtle rhyming.

    • 7 years ago

      by Eminent Bard

      Thank you. Someone really cares and loves us more than we can imagine <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Therapoetic4

    Our best work is when it comes from a deeply felt place. I see that in this work. Thank you for sharing.

    • 7 years ago

      by Eminent Bard

      Thanks. I haven't been writing poems for so long and this time words just overflowed out of my deep gratitude for the lessons I've learned from the circumstance I had.

  • 7 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Very good work, it is a Heart's prayer put to words from one who loves the Lord Jesus as I do also. Added to my Favorites!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hello Kababayan and I presume fellow Christian...This is very beautiful... and speaks a lot of how deep you know our Savior. Added to faves too!

    P.S. One single thing, seas in the first stanza does not rhyme freely with grace and it kind of disrupted the beautiful flow. But this is a lovely poem all in all. :-)

    • 7 years ago

      by Eminent Bard

      Thank you so much! More of Jesus in your life <3 :)