Like the form. Well employed. You've created a very strong central image here. Thanks for sharing.

With tears in my bleached eyes
^^I like this there is pain without mentioning
the word pain. Short yet the strong sadness lingers...take care

This is a saddening, emotional piece. It feels a little eerie in my opinion because I imagine this person every night since their loss bleaching their eyes to mask the pain, mask the tears but in all honesty it makes the pain and tears worse and the redness too and I know you wouldn't bleach your eyes but as meena says it shows your pain in such a short, lovely write

Em